jaime_rayne (jaime_rayne) wrote,
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my poem

well there it is one of my poems... i like that one i wrote it in ajax two summers ago when i was waiting inside a van for my friend to come out of a store.... I rather like it, but if you don't thats okay... feel free to comment on why you don't i rather like good criticsm, it make my poetry better. Anyway enjoy, or not, its really up to you.
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